Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 2126
Words Total: 7962 (68018)
Chapters: 27
Hero Mood: Mellow
Hero Condition: Hurting
Heroine Mood: Worried
Heroine Condition: Weak, but not getting weaker
Story Snippet:
"I didn’t know what to believe anymore." The narrow eyed look told him Nathan hadn’t forgiven him for that tape yet. "She doesn’t know, does she?"
"I don’t know what?" Mason piped up.
"That first night… I taped you." Sorol ground out. He didn’t want her to find out from Nathan. "I sent the tape to Nathan, thinking you’re Dixie."
She looked up at him in shock. "You did what?"
"I’m not proud of it, trust me." God no, he hated himself for it.
Mason sucked in a sharp breath, glanced at Nathan, then back at him. There was a distinct rosy tint to her cheeks. "He saw me naked?" Mason hissed, her eyes accusing him.
Yeah, he had. Sorol didn’t even want to think about who else might have seen that tape. "You know, on second thought, bring Cáel and Acwellan back to beat me some more."
Here we go again… but I might add more before the day is out.
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 1756
Words Total: 5836 (65892)
Chapters: 27
Hero Mood: Very bloody annoyed
Hero Condition: Still battered and bruised
Heroine Mood: Puzzled
Heroine Condition: Weak, but not getting weaker
Story Snippet:
"Since when can we command hellhounds?" Sorol spat. "They only listen to demons, and I’m not one, much as you treat me like one."
Nathan and Raguel exchanged a confused look. "I take it you deny killing Vezien, too?"
He’d kill that bastard, if he got his hands on him, for sure. After the pain he’d inflicted, he didn’t deserve better. Sorol lifted his eyes to Raguel, certain he’d read deadly intent in them. He couldn’t help it. "I didn’t kill him, but if you don’t keep him away from me, I’ll rip out his spleen and wear it as a necklace."
Mason gasped at his vicious reply. "Is that who tortured you?"
"One of them," Sorol muttered. "It was a combined effort."
Raguel shot him a warning look. "Stay away from them."
"Oh, it’s all right for them to rip me apart, but when I want a little revenge, I’m evil again?" God, that just figured. "God dammit, Raguel! Look at me! Where is the justice in this? I can’t even lift my arms, let alone walk away!"
Yeah yeah… I know… another challenge.
I took a break the first two days though.
But hey, I need another 20k or so on Sorol and it’s done and can percolate then.
Besides, this keeps me going, so I blog it.
It’s another Kiwiwriters challenge, but this time by a member. I like that idea.
Anyway… onward!
Ah yeah, I will put in brackets the total for the book, before that will be the challenge total.
Capisce?
(No, that’s how it’s spelled, dammit!)
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 4080
Words Total: 4080 (64136)
Chapters: 26
Hero Mood: Desperate
Hero Condition: Battered and bruised
Heroine Mood: Seriously pissed
Heroine Condition: Weak
Story Snippet:
Mason measured him with a cautious look, but finally nodded. "All right. But if you do anything to hurt him, I’ll make my sister a widow."
Behind them Chaia started to cough and headed out of the door.
Nathan rolled his eyes and grabbed Sorol’s head. "Hold still and relax."
Mason watched them like a hawk, her eyes narrowed at Nathan. If he made one wrong move, she’d tear his head off. They’d hurt Sorol too much for her to ever forgive them and she wouldn’t stand by and watch more harm being done to him. Not while there was a breath in her body.
Sorol groaned in agony, tried to get his head away from Nathan but the Nephilim wouldn’t let go. Mason was about to pull him off when Nathan shot a warning look at her.
"The bones are knitting together. That’s what’s hurting him. Don’t interrupt now."
(As an aside: All snippet files used, this is the final stretch atm.)
SoCNoC Total: 2618516 words written by 143 participants
The End of SoCNoc!
60,000 words! OMG!
I am damned amazed at myself. The book isn’t finished, but I’m very close to finishing the first draft.
Another 10-15k and I’m done.
The total words of SoCNoC will probably go up a little more as the US guys post their totals, but damn, that’s over 2 and a half million words written in one month!
Way to go, everyone who took part!
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 1003
Words Total: 60056
Hero Mood: Annoyed and desperate
Heroine Mood: Still sick
Story Snippet:
"We can’t take her up there."
Mason pretended to be asleep. Up where?
"Not much choice, Nathan. He’s a mess. He’s probably in worse shape than she is."
They were talking about Sorol, she knew it in her gut. Mason had no idea who the guy with Nathan was, but it appeared he knew where Sorol was.
"That bad? I know Cáel said they were interrogating him, but-"
"Nate, they ganged up on him. Each one doing as much damage as possible. When I saw him, he had a broken jaw, both arms were dislocated. He had a hard time breathing, so I assume his ribs are broken too. Hell, they killed him six times already. Brought him back each time only to kill him again."
Oh God. Mason lifted her head, staring at the newcomer.
"Damn," Nathan said softly. "She heard."
I’m planning to have 60k written by tomorrow night, nearly there.
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 2364
Words Total: 59053
Hero Mood: Dead
Heroine Mood: Sick
Story Snippet:
Whoever stood behind him pulled on his arms again, making him twist in the chair they’d put him in. He managed to hold back the scream this time. Over and over fists slammed into his head, breaking the skin, breaking bone. He couldn’t open his eyes anymore, they were both swollen completely shut.
Another brutal hit made him black out, but a bucket of water brought him back to his senses.
"None of that," he heard Acwellan say before a fist slammed into his jaw.
Sorol gasped with the pain, breathing was close to impossible now. Someone hit him with what he assumed was a baseball bat, finally breaking his jaw. Blood exploded into his mouth and he tried to swallow, but the agony almost made him choke. Then the bat slammed into his chest, breaking ribs, driving one of them clean into his heart.
"You fucking idiot! You killed him!" I wish, Sorol thought.
"He deserves it," Cáel spat, hitting him again.
The pain stopped and Sorol felt himself slide forward in the chair before everything went black.
Here we go again!
I’m starting to use up the snippets I scribbled over the course of this little excercise, so the story is starting to come together — and it’s nearing the end!
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 1788
Words Total: 56469
Hero Mood: Desperate
Heroine Mood: Weak
Story Snippet:
"Remember that cantankerous old miner?" Alvarez asked, grinning ear to ear.
"Victor Jones." Sorol groaned loudly. "How could I forget that bastard? He salted my rear end with that elephant gun of his."
Mason’s eyes widened. "What?"
"About four miles down the mountain used to be an old mining shack. The guy who lived there thought we were after his claim." Alvarez explained. "I used to nose around there in my wolf form, but Sorol can’t shift, so I pretended to be his dog."
"Right. Why were you checking out the guy? Were you after his gold?" Mason frowned.
Sorol and Alvarez exchanged a sheepish look.
"What?"
"Well, Jones had a daughter." Alvarez said haltingly. "Real pretty. Not like the hags in the camps, but a real beauty of a girl."
Mason lifted a brow at Sorol.
He stiffened. "Ah no, don’t look at me like this. I was just there to distract the old man. The dog had the hots for her, not me."
Alvarez growled at him.
Sorol grinned. "Down, Lassie."
Seeing them squabble like this made her laugh again. "Lassie was a girl, Sorol."
His grin became even broader. "I know."
Not really slack, just not posting progress as much as I should.
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 4679
Words Total: 54681
Hero Mood: Beliggerent and worried
Heroine Mood: Bewildered but elated
Story Snippet:
He flashed a wolfish grin and Sorol wanted to grab him and throw him out. Damn that guy. They’d made a sport out of snagging each other’s conquests and Alvarez with his dark latin looks had triumphed more often than Sorol cared to remember. “Of course, I have to admit Sorol has impeccable taste in women. I should know, I usually run off with them.”
Mason laughed, which had Sorol glower at both of them. “Oh don’t be such a stick in the mud, Sorol. He’s joking!”
“He’s not,” Sorol muttered.
Mason gave Alvarez a wide-eyed look. “No?”
“I made off with a handful in the past.” Alvarez confirmed.
“You try to make off with this one, and I’m going to have a wolf skin rug,” Sorol promised.
Alvarez grinned and winked at Mason. “I think he’s serious.”
It is done! 50k in 3 weeks, not bad going, methinks!
However the story isn’t finished… lets see how much I manage to write in the last week!
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 2340
Words Total: 50002
Hero Mood: Oblivious
Heroine Mood: Half Dead
Story Snippet:
“Don’t do this. Please.” Dixie hoped her plea would change his mind, but deep down she could sense something evil in him. Oddly, Mason seemed afraid of him. All this time she’d wanted Sorol, and now he was here and she looked terrified. Dixie couldn’t work it out. Why didn’t she say something? “Mason, I can’t let him take you.”
She struggled to say something, but Sorol cut her off with a brutal kiss.
Dixie shook with terror. This was the man her sister claimed to love? A man who seemed to scare her half to death? “Don’t. Please don’t take her.”
“Out of my way.” Sorol wrenched her away from the door, tossing her behind him as if she were garbage.
Dixie slammed into the wall and slid down it, stunned. She saw him open the door, then everything went black.
After slackage, I’m catching up a bit. Neatly at the 50k though, so I think I can afford a little slackage.
Title: Cursed Legacy – Sorol
Words Written: 3575
Words Total: 47342
Hero Mood: Devastated
Heroine Mood: Worried
Story Snippet:
“I should have stopped the bastard! I saw him, but Erzas went for him before I got there. Sorol took his head, Rag. He laughed at me, and disappeared.” Chaia’s eyes glittered with hatred. “He took his head.”
“Wait. Are you saying he left with it?” Raguel stared at the Nephilim.
“That’s what I’m saying.”
“Why would he do this? He’d feel as devastated as you do.” This made no sense. They couldn’t kill each other without feeling the loss of the soul, which generally prevented them from even trying. “You’re absolutely certain it was Sorol?”
Chaia lifted his eyes to Raguel, glaring at him. “I watched him cut Erzas’ head off, Rag! Of course I’m sure!”
